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  • Yeah....he should look dirtier....scuffed up...from living on the street...also...he should be holding a mystery bottle hidden in a brown paper bag...not a water bottle.

    alexander aflaloalexander aflalo25 өдрийн өмнө
  • Maybe a green sweat shirt instead of black? With different stains on it

    SketchSketch25 өдрийн өмнө
  • So his gloves were punched on as a kid, wouldn't his hands lose circulation as his hands got bigger?

    LeTianLeTian5 сарын өмнө
  • What happened to show quest I want to see you guys do great things!!

    Daniel PruittDaniel Pruitt7 сарын өмнө
  • We never get to see this shit

    DNZCDNZCЖилийн өмнө
  • I’d say if you want to make him a unique protagonist I’d say he should have some asymmetrism. Like maybe he’s got one arm that’s bigger. Or that he’s missing a leg. I think it would almost add some backstory that the audience can make up for him. Or he can use it as a story device like jokers scars, always making up a new story for his missing leg or why one arm is smaller than the other.

    SlitheryJackSlitheryJackЖилийн өмнө
  • what does tom do again?

    Crusher 497Crusher 497Жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch's legs should be smaller like the original.

    RObertRObertЖилийн өмнө
  • What animation is at 3:18 ?

    TheZero092TheZero092Жилийн өмнө
  • In my hubmel opnion altho it´s a year too late the guy on the left looks a bit to much like a naruto/woodchopper, instead of being that hardy woodchopper, idk it´s a wierd fusion tbh and it´s going to be hard to make work, that´s my 5 million dollars

    Robert KraciukRobert KraciukЖилийн өмнө
  • a gut maybe?

    MrAirbornstingerMrAirbornstingerЖилийн өмнө
  • So do I get the ice with the hoodie???

    blinkingredblinkingredЖилийн өмнө
  • You really need to put up some drywall in the basement

    NameofthegameNameofthegameЖилийн өмнө
  • I imagine scratch as a skinny Homeless person with a big coats and hoodies on

    Orange JoeOrange JoeЖилийн өмнө
  • make him skrufy

    Hunter BrooksHunter BrooksЖилийн өмнө
  • Thicker legs?

    Damsixam o.ODamsixam o.OЖилийн өмнө
  • (Sorry I forgot the home less guys name) try to make him thinner in the upper body but not to the point to where you loss the style. You could do this to show how he’s not as strong and built as Stan and to give him a less threatening Physique. This could help the idea that he is following him or Stan is his teacher.

    Kmj1000 HiKmj1000 HiЖилийн өмнө
  • The kneepads

    lee miskimminlee miskimminЖилийн өмнө
  • You probably aren't checking this any more, but I think Scratch needs a belly

    That Ben GuyThat Ben GuyЖилийн өмнө
  • Maybe make his upper torso a little smaller to emphasize of being out of shape, unless that removes the characteristic of him looking or being tuff, if that's what you want as a characteristic for him.

    Channel i use to watch age-restricted videosChannel i use to watch age-restricted videosЖилийн өмнө
  • Hehe it's Mick Foley

    dirty dwagzdirty dwagzЖилийн өмнө
  • Legs are to long

    Miller IMiller I2 жилийн өмнө
  • You both give me blood clots And I like that lots

    The Active BeginningThe Active Beginning2 жилийн өмнө
  • His legs look a tad disproportionate. Maybe some stumpier legs and some stains down his front?

    Sean EdgarSean Edgar2 жилийн өмнө
  • His legs need to be longer and a little thicker

    A & Ds Adventures and some times LoganA & Ds Adventures and some times Logan2 жилийн өмнө
  • FERB

    S A D N I G G IS A D N I G G I2 жилийн өмнө
  • Yeah, like most of the comments have pointed out he doesnt look homeless enough, he kinda lost his homeless look. And for me the Legs look too skinny or somthing about the legs look off. But still great job. 👍

    2 Fists2 Fists2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch Needs Elbow pads to fit more with his Wrestling look maybe that's his fight style

    BluntAmputationBluntAmputation2 жилийн өмнө
  • ads

    Ajoni WebbAjoni Webb2 жилийн өмнө
  • He needs a beer belly a bit of chunk if he drinks but not out of shap

    Rage GamerRage Gamer2 жилийн өмнө
  • The only thing is on Stan you have a lot of curved lines, there’s almost no straight lines, but on scratch you have a lot of straight lines, it’s just a thought, it might tie them together if you give scratch more curvy lines.

    Dallin MorrisDallin Morris2 жилийн өмнө
    • I also feel like scratches feet are way small compared to Stan

      Dallin MorrisDallin Morris2 жилийн өмнө
  • Give scratch a little beer gut

    Weetard112Weetard1122 жилийн өмнө
  • Make scratch look more homeless like make his shirt or jacket have dried stains on them and dirty denim shorts and instead of two socks give him one sock and one leg warmer his hair should have a slightly greasy look

    ChexRex1ChexRex12 жилийн өмнө
  • Change the outline color of the bottle. Too bright.

    KallyKally2 жилийн өмнө
  • Hands and arms are wired I don't know why

    PH_R_12 PH_R_12PH_R_12 PH_R_122 жилийн өмнө
  • you were looking for a drunk style so maybe give scratch chunky legs so there is weight to his runnning or movements

    Ryan TurtelRyan Turtel2 жилийн өмнө
  • Oh he's definitely gotta be an Aussie character 😂

    BattleBear1997artBattleBear1997art2 жилийн өмнө
  • Give Scratch extra thick calves.

    Andrew PearsonAndrew Pearson2 жилийн өмнө
  • Make him look older. With stains on his clothes. Sometimes drooling.

    Cryme2faceCryme2face2 жилийн өмнө
  • Just make scratch really tall and naturally burly

    REVOisMYnameREVOisMYname2 жилийн өмнө
  • make his legs bigger basically......../

    dan romandan roman2 жилийн өмнө
  • Maybe his legs should be thiccer

    Chona ChonaChona Chona2 жилийн өмнө
  • his legs seem very thin

    Obi DexstrexObi Dexstrex2 жилийн өмнө
  • Make scratch future Marty mc fly

    SyringeSyringe2 жилийн өмнө
  • Yeah, scratch does not look homeless enough

    Enrique De la RosaEnrique De la Rosa2 жилийн өмнө
  • The hair annoys me

    E Z R AE Z R A2 жилийн өмнө
  • you could give scratch schizophrenia as an explanation for seeing homlessness many homeless people suffer from mental disorders so it would fit him

    Bogdan LulelaruBogdan Lulelaru2 жилийн өмнө
  • A homeless guy should be lugging around a paper bag and some booze in it! Uses it as a secret weapon maybe?

    amishterrorist17amishterrorist172 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch is to clean. Frankly, the guy needs stains if he's supposed to be a hobo. Patches in his clothes where it wore through and other such yada yadas.

    Fail Rage RepeatFail Rage Repeat2 жилийн өмнө
  • add like a belly on him

    luke sandridgeluke sandridge2 жилийн өмнө
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    The Three NekoesThe Three Nekoes2 жилийн өмнө
  • I think this looks great overall, If I were to give criticism though, I think the only thing I could point out is that his legs look a bit like a volleyball girl-ish. Its the only thing that looks "off" to me. Maybe just thicken them a smidge..? Idk.

    James BurlettJames Burlett2 жилийн өмнө
  • Make Scratch's hair color a bit lighter, like more brown but not too light. The dark colors kind of take away from his charm. Also, I agree with everyone else that he needs to look more homeless. Dirty his clothes up a bit. I think Stan needs more definition in his arms. I like that Scratch's arms are big with no definition. But you have to make Stan look more jacked without being over buffed.

    NE SWNE SW2 жилийн өмнө
  • I feel like his legs are too thin they need to be bigger and I see what don sees

    Damon JensenDamon Jensen2 жилийн өмнө
  • make scratch more dirty and adjust the legs

    Spartan guitar showSpartan guitar show2 жилийн өмнө
  • He looks to clean. The hoodie should be more wrinkly or rigid maybe?

    David MarvelDavid Marvel2 жилийн өмнө
  • I think Stan and scratch should kiss. That's it

    Bear TubaBear Tuba2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch should be “Prison Ripped” where his legs are thin and stringy with knobby knees but an overly developed upper body.Also Stan still looks like he pours Creatine powder on his cereal in the morning.Less round more ripped Don.Love your guys stuff.

    BigW88BigW882 жилийн өмнө
  • Maybe make his clothes a little more ruffled and dirty

    NebulahawkNebulahawk2 жилийн өмнө
  • The knee pads and shirt with the same color looks off to me. Maybe Long slevees, fingerless gloves, dirty yellow socks, a bottle in a paper bag with dirty clothes and some tired eyes would look more homeless

    MapleCookieMapleCookie2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratches legs looks a bit skinny compared to his big body and tree trunk arms

    David LimDavid Lim2 жилийн өмнө
  • Get rid of the knee pads and give him long tattered pants and bigger ragged boots

    Chuck DChuck D2 жилийн өмнө
  • Do not redo homlessness

    RyanRyan2 жилийн өмнө
  • Only thing I noticed about scratch was that his neck lines look like the go down into his chest. So they look a little big but other than that looks great

    ajakinaboxajakinabox2 жилийн өмнө
  • give scratch a stupid hair cut, just like Tom's, and also give scratch different color knee pads (like a dirty green). Also maybe change the color of his pants they are too dark.

    Daniel PluginDaniel Plugin2 жилийн өмнө
  • I love how Scratch is based on a homeless Mick Folly lol

    Shadow Abbott 影Shadow Abbott 影2 жилийн өмнө
    • Shadow Abbott Mick folly is basically homeless person anyway

      Daniel ThurlowDaniel Thurlow2 жилийн өмнө
  • Put a stain or two on his shirt(s)

    WESLEYWESLEY2 жилийн өмнө
  • He looks a little bit too clean

    Mr BoyMr Boy2 жилийн өмнө
  • I’m sold on scratch, but I’m still not feeling Stan with the current improvements.

    Egg rollEgg roll2 жилийн өмнө
  • I want your hoodie, but I don’t like, want to pay for it.

    Egg rollEgg roll2 жилийн өмнө
  • It's good but not great, Try to make him look a little more homeless and it'll be a lot better👌

    TylerETylerE2 жилийн өмнө
  • Give him a long jacket so he looks like he’s Prepared for the cold and rain outside

    D.R. StudiosD.R. Studios2 жилийн өмнө
  • Make scratch have at least like some bruises like in random areas and also stars like he knows had a fight but not that well like homeless fighting like it’s a scratch on his eye . You should also give him aLazy eye

    D.R. StudiosD.R. Studios2 жилийн өмнө
  • Look at him fights to make scratch look more homeless

    Chris 1Chris 12 жилийн өмнө
  • I think the legs are un proportional to the body

    LaughyLaughy2 жилийн өмнө
  • scratch's coloring looks weirdly flat to me. i dont know. the design looks fine though

    DamonDamon2 жилийн өмнө
  • Give scratch a metal arm

    Rory ThompsonRory Thompson2 жилийн өмнө
  • I think it's his actual body doesn't fit his face if that makes sense and is a little diprortionate

    ArkadiRiderArkadiRider2 жилийн өмнө
  • Yeah I agree with tom, the lines on the jacket look too straight, maybe a crease or two or a tear in one side?

    Scroto BagginsScroto Baggins2 жилийн өмнө
  • You should give him tiny hands.

    the emerald palacethe emerald palace2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch need a flash gif hoodie

    Phil someone upPhil someone up2 жилийн өмнө
  • Hey there verybody just wanted to take a second to explain the importantants of pocket ice. You see before I know about pocket ice my life wasa spiraling out of control not that I have pocket ice my life is back on track thanks guys my summer will now be one of fun and meryment. P.S. Fuck Don

    kempachieoakempachieoa2 жилийн өмнө
  • I feel like scratch needs to have ripped up blue jean shorts. Other than that he is great

    KavaMotoKavaMoto2 жилийн өмнө
  • I feel like scratch needs a little more rugidness to him. As his current design kinda makes him seem more lumber jakey than homeless.

    TheBeast IsBackTheBeast IsBack2 жилийн өмнө
  • hes homeless right , shouldnt he be dirty or raged on his shines or jumpper

    nan crossannan crossan2 жилийн өмнө
  • The jacket needs to have more highlights going dow. To make it less flat and I think the first should be just a little bit bigger

    SilentSerpent017SilentSerpent0172 жилийн өмнө
  • If Scratch could be slightly smaller than he currently is, also think about a midget side kick to scratch that lives in a trash can similar to Oscar the Grouch, his sidekick isn’t there all the time but he shows up when you least expect it

    Michael SweeneyMichael Sweeney2 жилийн өмнө
  • Guy, how about some cups and stuff, also would love a t-shirt with the TRANSformers.. Just ordered my gimmi ya belt tshirt! love it :)

    Kelvin WKelvin W2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch looks great! He looks like a nice, chill guy, but still beefy enough to be able to fight and shit. I think a lot of that is because his shoulders slope down more - he seems less stressed and aggressive than Stan

    Jorza4daWorldJorza4daWorld2 жилийн өмнө
  • I'm probably just harping on about this now. The arms are stillll disproportionate, forearms are never as thick as biceps/triceps, it just looks weird. Otherwise the Scratch drawings look really good. The haggard lines were ok, but yes he needed some diagonals or something on the chest / torso area to add realism? Don is very talented of course, this is not a critique on his abilities, but be flexible man! Listen to us! :P

    Venturi LifeVenturi Life2 жилийн өмнө
  • the fluid in the bottle he is holding matches his over-shirt too much

    SgtSmuckersSgtSmuckers2 жилийн өмнө
  • These two a great artists and I really enjoy their work. TRANSformers, Crazy Conor McGregor, all comedy gold. The criticism I have for the two characters they are creating is that they don’t have a great balance. With duos, there needs to be a dynamic where they are diametrically opposed, which helps them or for comedy sake, one drags the over down. Stan and scratch both appear very similar as they are both appear to be counter productive. If Stan were to stay as is, scratch would need to have a big, dark back story (hinted at regularly and slowly revealed) as a fallen champ who is down on his luck who tries to help Stan but Stan constantly undermines the effort, or events out of their control constantly set them back. A bit like pinky and the brain. Or they hate each other and are forced together. Either way, I’m looking forward for the next instalment.

    J CrowJ Crow2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch looks a little stocky to be homeless imo

    Taka BruteTaka Brute2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch isn't ragedy enough, he looks more like a hill billy than a hobo, he's too clean and neat to be homeless

    KrobslyKrobsly2 жилийн өмнө
  • Y’all should make another animation

    GuzgodGuzgod2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch should be a little more gruff looking, and maybe look like he's been through some shit. He is homeless, after all. Adding that depth to his design would be an opportunity for you to visually correlate his character development throughout the show. Also, shows with a main character duo usually have a vastly different character appearance, as it helps easily differentiate between the characters, triggering different visceral opinions between the two. Think Rick and Morty, Dexter and DeeDee, Samurai Jack and his Scottish machine gun legged pal, Phineas and Ferb, etc. Right now, Scratch just looks like a re-skin of Stan, which might be visually bland or indistinct.

    Sympathetic VybrationsSympathetic Vybrations2 жилийн өмнө
  • Same thing as all other people say: he looks too "clean" so mess him up! If he had some hair on his arms, that'd make him a lot manlier/harder

    Claire GrubeClaire Grube2 жилийн өмнө
  • I like the character but i think its the legs that are the problem they are a bit bland i think.

    Big BenBig Ben2 жилийн өмнө
  • Scratch’s eyes man, something about them, also add damage to attire

    Pancho BrownPancho Brown2 жилийн өмнө
  • Zip but no zipline.

    Oskar MöllOskar Möll2 жилийн өмнө